Beautiful imagery, Snehalsaju, this poem does have an air of teenage growing pains to it, I…

…es return, with the
snake they descend. The wind hides
in the clouds, too frail to see you fall,
the birds look away, waiting
for the wind to come their way.
You grow on grass, and love remains
a home you never found.

The Teen's Tangent

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Snehal Saju

Edward Swafford

Nov 14, 2023

Beautiful imagery, Snehalsaju, this poem does have an air of teenage growing pains to it, I definitely interpret it as you intended!

Thanks so much for your submission!

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